1. Unhealthy
- obese - negative impact - health and well being - long life - heart failure - gruesome death - organs begging for mercy |
2. Rubbish
- pollution - greenhouse gases - ozone layer - innocent animals - turtles consuming our rubbish, no bobbing on the top of the ocean - starve to death for our salty goodness - school of rotting wrappers |
3. Hyperactivity
- packed with preservatives - lacking in nutrients - vital - brain productivity - barrier to learning - starve your brain - brain bouncing around while the rest of you is trying to learn |
Persuasive Writing Structure:
Introduction (2RQ + 1S ) Reason 1 Reason 2 Reason 3 Rebuttal/What others think but why I'm still right Conclusion |
Paragraph Structure:
Introduce the Reason Explain the Reason Evidence you are correct How it affects the reader (link to the question) |
Example:
A gruesome death is all you will achieve on a life on junk food. (introduce the reason) Our body craves nutrition for a life of health and well being, junk food is unnatural. (explain the reason) Just look at the nutritional information and see it flooded with excessive chemicals. (evidence I'm correct) Do you want a our school children living a life of obesity and being imprisoned in their own “fat filled” body? (how it affects the reader)
A gruesome death is all you will achieve on a life on junk food. (introduce the reason) Our body craves nutrition for a life of health and well being, junk food is unnatural. (explain the reason) Just look at the nutritional information and see it flooded with excessive chemicals. (evidence I'm correct) Do you want a our school children living a life of obesity and being imprisoned in their own “fat filled” body? (how it affects the reader)